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Menacing Snarl
Contributed by
windowguy
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Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 01:35:22 AM in AEST
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Restrained Doberman
Behind tall black iron gate -
Cat calmly walks by.
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windowguy
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2009-08-17 01:35:22]
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Re: Menacing Snarl
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by orphani on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 01:53:53 AM AEST
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masterful haiku
i bow
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Re: Menacing Snarl
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 09:32:34 AM AEST
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You capture this perfectly in this three-lined haiku. Every word conveys the image perfectly.
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Re: Menacing Snarl
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 09:51:40 AM AEST
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lol great write, really refreshing to read.
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Re: Menacing Snarl
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by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 10:28:35 AM AEST
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| thats one cool cat. lol i loved it, its awesome. |
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Re: Menacing Snarl
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 01:50:53 PM AEST
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Very picturesque....well done..
Jenni |
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Re: Menacing Snarl
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 01:07:32 AM AEST
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this contains many meanings. (wonder what would happen if the Doberman's owner unlocked the gate!) i like it. excellent work...
take care
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