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polish. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 01:39:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I am enlightened
enough. . .
to know
nothing. . .
love is a vague whisper
upon lips. . .
long gone
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-08-16 13:39:39]
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Re: polish. . .
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by orphani on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 02:26:10 PM AEST
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you suprise me
beautiful work
1 point then it's perfact
"enough..... to know
nothing"
very special.
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Re: polish. . .
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 04:10:44 PM AEST
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You confuse me half the time I read what you write
Yet without understanding I still like with I read
strange....I do like what you have here
great poem
I hope to understand and read more
-Kelly |
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Re: polish. . .
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by Incognito_Bombastus on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 04:13:08 PM AEST
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it is said the Delphic oracle declared Socrates the wisest of men because he knew he knew nothing. I think love is always going to be long gone, its the nature of things. A whisper is almost silent & transitory. You captured a nice piece of nebulous reality here.
Thanks I.B. |
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Re: polish. . .
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by ming on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 08:09:13 PM AEST
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Elle...you are one of my favorites! Love this. You inspire.
ming |
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Re: polish. . .
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 09:01:28 PM AEST
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Perfect poetic version of polished imperfection.
Heidi |
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Re: polish. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 10:13:21 AM AEST
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Nice!
-Phil |
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Re: polish. . .
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by Antzus on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 12:59:49 AM AEST
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Nihilistic?
I still like it. |
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