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It Rains When I Smile
Contributed by
CharminglyAwkward
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Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 09:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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when did i become such a breeding site for disaster?
a twisted slide of emotion.
a bag of leisure festering of boredom, of spite.
ive been in a mild depression for so long.
and now since my suns been gone
i have not one inspiration to get up in the morning.
it rains when i smile.
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2009-08-15 21:39:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It Rains When I Smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 10:21:10 PM AEST (User
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I suppose anything goes, but have pride in your work! Consider proper grammar and capitalization. It gives readers more respect for your work.
I mean this in the most respectful way possible. |
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