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Uncertainty
Contributed by
carmela
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Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 09:00:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Uncertain of what tomorrow would hold
I never thought I would have to face my greatest fear
I never listened to what I was told
I chose to ignore that I felt the end was near
Uncertain of what we would be
We need to be together
For this was my only plea
One way or another, we need each other
Uncertain if you felt it too
I never thought that I’d see you as a different person
Different from what I thought I knew
This unfortunate fact made our situation worsen
Uncertainty is the only thing that keeps me going on
The facts, I am not able to accept
Not being able to realize that you are gone
Facing that our love is inept
Uncertain if this feeling will go away
The thought of you not being there is too much to take
The hurt in my heart I cannot convey
No longer can my heart continue to break
Copyright ©
carmela
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2009-08-15 09:00:26]
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Re: Uncertainty
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by AchingSoul on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 10:43:28 AM AEST
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I really really loved this poem!
I can totally relate to the emotions it conveys...
Great work! |
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Re: Uncertainty
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by orphani on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 10:52:08 AM AEST
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remember all hearts that break can be mended.
clear concise composition well rounded. |
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Re: Uncertainty
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by LadyRose on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 11:42:38 AM AEST
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I can relate to this aswell.......isnt a heart but just a bundle of emotional depth rolled into a person?It cannot help but break when its been tortured by an absent love......
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