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Dying slowly
Contributed by
LadyRose
on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 07:46:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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DYING SLOWLY
Drip..........
Drip.........
Drip........
in a little puddle on the floor
something is leaking heavily
Drip...
Drip.......
feeling weak and drowsy
Sleepy.........
cant keep my eyes open
lungs expanding fast
i am falling........
sinking to the ground
everything in slow motion
place my hand on my chest
MY HEART!!!!!!!
my heart is bleeding
all the life is oozing out of me
I miss you so much
I am dying slowly.............
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LadyRose
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2009-08-15 07:46:16]
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Re: Dying slowly
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by orphani on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 09:15:51 AM AEST
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of all things i do not want to die slow
and i do not wish this for you either
if i am not worthy in my final hour
let GOD consume me in his righthous fire
but you must live slowly that i should not be deprived of a single letter that is yet to be written. |
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Re: Dying slowly
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by PreciousKitten on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 10:44:55 AM AEST
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| i loved it. thats how im feeling right now,so i understand. |
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