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Mending Heart
Contributed by
PoetryWriter11
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Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 11:36:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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My heart was broken,
can the heart mend?
I thought it was over,
I thought it was the end.
Can it be fixed wih stitches,
or be takin one step at a time,
no ones heart it is ,
it couldnt have been broken like mine.
It takes time,
but someday it will heal,
is there anyone,
who could understand how I might feel?
As dawn is breaking,
another day is gone,
my heart is mending,
and now I know its moving on.
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Re: Mending Heart
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by FragileStrength on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 01:47:53 PM AEST
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| I thought this was really good. You took a very painful situation and explained so eloquently. well done |
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Re: Mending Heart
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by shelby on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 08:58:18 PM AEST
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I loved the fact you ended it with help.
Yes we cannot stay down for long, tomorrow is a new day. Lovely poem.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Mending Heart
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by LadyRose on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 07:01:19 AM AEST
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| Oh yes I know how you feel,the heart is a strong organ but its also the thing that makes you feel weak.....I can relate to every word. |
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