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My Own
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 07:52:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am breathing in my own suicide
side by side
with the next generation
you leave me no choice but to stay (but to go)
The hole digs itself deeper
Love me, or love me not
I trespass softly across your horizons
Mistaking what you don't have for what you want
when you really want to be free from all earthly bounds.
Light me up like a smile across your face
dance the dreams with me, wind breaking
(settle for nothing less than breathtaking)
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-08-14 07:52:09]
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Re: My Own
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by spooky on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 08:37:09 AM AEST
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life is damageing, but to believe in something and truley wanting it is a gift, your words that you write, means more to me than not reading what you have to say,,keep writting
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: My Own
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 09:12:39 PM AEST
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| I realize it's painful to write but you definitely got a really nice style of writing poetry. Me likes! |
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Re: My Own
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by LadyRose on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 07:59:21 AM AEST
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I dont know what to say..........although I feel I have to say something.......I have been through this some time before.......I breath in life now........
LadyRose |
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Re: My Own
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 10:49:10 AM AEST
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Superb language use once again, in particular:
'I trespass softly across your horizons'
That line is just incredible.
-Phil |
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