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air.............o
Contributed by
orphani
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Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 05:12:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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i.....want to take....you
in my arms
kissing what i believe
but (you are a ghost)
and will not be touched
yet....you touch me
living
even when i sleep
you caress me
you are the deepest part of me
a spirit that never sleeps
my love.
Copyright ©
orphani
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2009-08-14 05:12:38]
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Re: air.............o
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 07:11:22 AM AEST
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I like this one a great deal because it get me thinking on many levels (as I often do, sometimes overanalyzing). It is true poetry is limitless; you can have anything you want. I hope this (ghost) doesn't represent a love one that you lost in physical form. I love this poem. Sorry if I overanalyzed. Again, thanks for the positive comments you give my about my poetry. I am a poetry lover.
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Re: air.............o
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by shelby on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 09:05:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful,
yes I can read a couple different things into this write. I also hope the ghost you speak of isn't someone you lost........ Ahhhhh but as you said, in poetry we can have anything.
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Re: air.............o
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by LadyRose on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 07:33:27 AM AEST
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I love this one.......isnt this what most lonely souls dream of?.....this is a very sweet poem.....
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Re: air.............o
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by Maygee on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:56:02 PM AEST
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| I think it's very sweet :) |
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