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seagull days
Contributed by
orphani
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Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 02:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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there are days i am not agile in
seagull days
only they have mastered
lighter then light they soar) while i.....
burning frozen limping
with salt and shells and drifted wood
stand discarded in the tidal plastic
i knew you once birds--- close to God
i knew and flew wing to wing with you
then........ but how small in your view
a grain of sand from so high.
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orphani
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2009-08-13 14:53:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: seagull days
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 03:52:08 PM AEST (User
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I like this poem. Very Imaginative! |
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Re: seagull days
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 11:25:14 PM AEST (User
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absolute brilliant and sooo beautiful, i just love how you wrote this one; the perspective-everything; fabulous!
hugs n' love nessa
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