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A Letter Home
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dear Mother,
Hello mom, I'm ok, just a little shook up the last few days,
No we still haven't found Saddam, we just keep dropping bombs,
How's sissy doing, she's lost weight, that's great,
I'm doing fine, it just seems I'm lost in time,
Yes Tearsica is holding on, sometimes though she finds it hard to stay strong,
But I can understand, it's been a year since she's seen her man,
Yeah the wether is fine, it starts to warm up about this time,
Yes I still write poetry, even though nobody knows me,
Life is at a stand still, no mom I'm not gonna get killed,
Don't worry so much, it's bad for your heart and stuff,
Kim's got a new boyfriend now, I think his 16, and his hair is brown,
No mom I'm not going to Iraq, so just relax,
But if I go, I'll be sure to write home,
Yes mother I'll wear clean underware, and my hair will be combed,
No I haven't gone to church, I've been working so hard it hurts,
But I do pray, I hope God listens to what I have to say,
How's dad, is the playstation still making him mad,
I miss you too, and I want to thank you,
For always being there, always showing me you care,
Showing me wrong from right, most of all giving me life,
Well I better let you go, I got another mission you know,
I love you, and think about you, in everything I do,
Forever your son, The Phantom.
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2003-03-30 12:05:00]
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Re: A Letter Home
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:20:46 PM AEST
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| awww a sweet letter from a loving son, im sure she will love this, your 14th line brought a huge smile to my face as i have a son who lives away from me and i wonder about that lol, great write, huggs n' love to you n' yours always nessa |
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Re: A Letter Home
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 03:52:06 PM AEST
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wonderful write,, so sweet and from the heart.
Sharon |
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Re: A Letter Home
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:52:24 PM AEST
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| AAAWWW This brought tears to me,I hope you will be able to see them all soon,I'll pray for a safe & early return then you can tell her personally!Christina |
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Re: A Letter Home
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:53:09 PM AEST
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| AAAWWW This brought tears to me,I hope you will be able to see them all soon,I'll pray for a safe & early return then you can tell her personally!Christina |
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Re: A Letter Home
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by venkat on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 05:34:55 AM AEST
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| well drawn.. nothing missed.. A true life picture..very caring about all feelings of your mother. with touches of love, pain , caring and humour. very lucid. Thanks for sharing this beautiful letter.. vevenkat |
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Re: A Letter Home
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 05:40:51 AM AEST
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Yet another great poem from the Phanton - but I never expect less!!
sleepless_siren |
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Re: A Letter Home
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 09:36:34 PM AEST
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Lovely and so touching.... with just the right amount of humour..loved it..
Jenni |
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Re: A Letter Home
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:48:41 PM AEST
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| another touching write.....how could it be otherwise? Very beautiful poem, phantom, i hope you get to see them all soon. Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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