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Second Son
Contributed by
karoody
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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The first baby came
They were ecstatic
Pictures covered the wall
Hey, they even framed the first outfit
And then I came
I guess it became a hassle
Chasing two kids...
He gets new stuff all the time
I get all his trash
What did I do wrong?
I try to be sweet
Behave the best I can
But they still take me nowhere
And there's no picture on the wall
No matter what I do
They pay no attention to me
But my only crime
Was being the second son.
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-03-30 11:35:00]
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Re: Second Son
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:25:45 PM AEST
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| awwww........ |
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Re: Second Son
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 03:54:49 PM AEST
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very good...i hope he never really has to feel that way
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Re: Second Son
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by venkat on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 02:41:10 AM AEST
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| I saw the maturity of expression in this poem also you coul feel like a little child that was neglected.. and came with a good poem .. venkat |
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Re: Second Son
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 09:59:12 PM AEST
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Kara, this is great.... you got inside his little haed so well... I can really imagine a second son thinking like that...
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