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I Love Jesus
Contributed by
romitalian
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Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 08:46:22 PM in AEST
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There are 11 reasons why I love Jesus!
He died on the cross to save us from our sin.
He poured out his blood so ALL can one day be with him.
He forgives us when it seems we shouldn't be forgiven.
He cried for the lost as the nails they were driven.
His love never ceases, yet whatever we do,
He forgives me and says, "I'm waiting for you."
He guides me and leads me as I go through my days.
And he always takes the time to listen when I kneel down and pray.
His promises he keeps unlike any one else.
He thinks of me before he thinks of him self.
But the number one reason I love him so much.
For me he shed his blood, and my heart he has touched.
mark~
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Re: I Love Jesus
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 10:23:16 PM AEST
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Hey.. great poem but I have a suggestion...
It would be much better if you stuck to one
point of view (ie either first person (I) or as a collective (we)) Just a thought on this... hope you don't mind my constructive criticism...feel free to take it with a grain of salt or if you ignore it that's okay too.
In any case this is a good write
Keep writing!
Daniela |
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Re: I Love Jesus
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:40:14 AM AEST
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| No im glad you listed the reasons......... you know what your talking about. you know how real he is and what he done for you and what he can do for everyone...good write... sandy |
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Re: I Love Jesus
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:28:25 PM AEST
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| GOOD POEM I LIKE IT WELL DONE |
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Re: I Love Jesus
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 02:59:48 PM AEST
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| i believe you have xpressed your love for Jesus in a way no one could. and you did good.keep it on. |
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Re: I Love Jesus
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by 3660Days on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 01:53:21 PM AEST
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| can't argue with that :-P |
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