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little-self
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 09:50:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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holding my younger
self's hand in my own
spin time
like weaving a relationship
like a pin drop
to a thunderclap
fall away
lunatic moment
no more
than an illusion
against a sparkle
of stars.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-08-12 09:50:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: little-self
(User Rating: 1 ) by orphani on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 06:35:16 PM AEST (User
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good use of imagery
good construction
i thought it could have been fleshed out a little more
altogether well done. |
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