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Farther From Sight
Contributed by
ThirtyDays
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You ended our being in a casual way
You said you were sorry we went astray
It seemed so odd, since you proclaimed your love
When you pushed me off, you killed my dove
I was always open, like a good book
You read and read, always stopping to look
I followed your footsteps to understand why
No closer, no farther, ignoring my cries
You had no remorse, no sense of sympathy
Oh how I tried, to see you show empathy
All of my cards, all of my letters
I'm convinced now, that I deserved better
Now I've turned and I'm walking away
Farther from sight, nothing left to say
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ThirtyDays
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2003-03-30 10:35:00]
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Re: Farther From Sight
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Farther From Sight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 04:51:25 AM AEST
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Great poem. Strong emotion and I love the way you have expressed yourself and the pain you suffered.
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