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love, once and again
Contributed by
Demon42069
on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As we sputter and fade
can it all drift away
or so easy forgotten
what once was life's way
i can't lose you now
or ever again
it's all in our hands
as it always has been.
See can we not
it was just meant to be
together alone
will our souls tend to key.
As i always have, so shall
it always be true
we belong with each other
til the world life renew.
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Demon42069
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2003-03-30 10:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: love, once and again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 07:00:41 PM AEST (User
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good write
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Re: love, once and again
(User Rating: 1 ) by justworshipjesus on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 08:57:47 PM AEST (User
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Tony
The rhythm and rhyme reflect deep thought and passion... and your steady insight creates great anticipation. i like this poem and the other "untitled" short notes.
You moved me to write my first peom... it's posted and i covet YOUR thoughts
kelly |
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