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amber
Contributed by
orphani
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Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 09:28:27 PM in AEST
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tickle feet touched
smile,
bird like in their nesting
transience-
your lips part
leaving behind that indentedness
of (place)
unfolded disarray of jeans become
your shape
with out body- blue
and untouchable
textures
to rough to allow-
encased in amber.
Copyright ©
orphani
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2009-08-11 21:28:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: amber
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 11:29:58 PM AEST (User
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My friend, Flow of your words are absolutely flawless and beautiful.
God bless you
Regards,
FRANCO |
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Re: amber
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lee on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 06:52:33 PM AEST (User
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very interesting
the imagery is well-used
good poem |
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