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Wicked Butterfly
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Wicked butterfly,
Wings laced with poison,
Deadly beauty veiled by color,
A gentle, but lethal caress.
Wicked butterfly,
Cause of my distress,
Do not taunt my dreams
With your promise of death’s kiss.
Wicked, deadly butterfly,
Fly swiftly with the wind,
Take your haunting memories
Onto another's day and end.
Wicked, fiendish butterfly,
You’ve dealt me enough blows,
Halt your arcane torture,
Release my weeping soul.
Wicked, foulest butterfly,
These tears you cause are mine,
The tears that taint your blossom are blood,
My soul fading with time -
Vanishing with the lies...
Fleeting on the wings of deceit;
Trailing on the wings,
Of the wicked, wicked butterfly...
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2003-03-30 08:35:00]
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Re: Wicked Butterfly
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:27:51 AM AEST
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| several things come to mind for the meaning behind your butterfly, i'll pm you, i love this:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Wicked Butterfly
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:01:30 PM AEST
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| when i read this, the image of someone you love but shouldn't comes to mind - but i really can't say. this is beautiful though and clearly a well developed metaphor. the language is pretty and visual but there are darker undertones. great write, perhaps you might like to read my poem 'bulimic butterfly', its similar! Kate x |
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Re: Wicked Butterfly
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:04:48 PM AEST
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very good write..well done
Sharon |
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Re: Wicked Butterfly
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by Fudge on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 05:35:39 PM AEST
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| beautifully artistic. like it very much. i didnt sleep last night so i can't figure it out. its about drugs isn't it. no just kidding. but seriously i love it. its one of those poems i want to show everyone. |
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Re: Wicked Butterfly
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by Phoenix2003 on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 11:23:53 PM AEST
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| yea she kicks ass u know it all she rules with words deeped hearted words from the heart |
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Re: Wicked Butterfly
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by harrypothead on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:29:15 PM AEST
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great poem.
v
m a m
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guess who, it's two people. |
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