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This Wholeness Would Be Broken
Contributed by
Sagacious
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Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 06:47:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Shattered glass presents
this maudlin image of splintering
shards, and vital penetration:
Because the mirror broke--we must be bled.
Because we would be bled--we must be broken,
and mourn the murdered reflection.
Death becomes this face,
in shards revealing the more
their dullness, for their brokenness:
Because this wholeness would--
face itself? Rather, face annihilation.
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Sagacious
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2009-08-10 18:47:13]
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Re: This Wholeness Would Be Broken
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 06:12:20 AM AEST
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Nothing writes quite like sadness. Nothing stings quite like poetry.
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Re: This Wholeness Would Be Broken
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:10:44 PM AEST
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Death becomes this face,
in shards revealing the more
their dullness, for their brokenness:
So powerful, the entire write I felt.
I loved the flow.
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Re: This Wholeness Would Be Broken
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by spud on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 05:18:29 AM AEST
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Hi
I have to say, I've felt like this a couple of times -
but never had the words to express it.
You've done it for me - perfect - thank you.
Tommy
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