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Evolution
Contributed by
romitalian
on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 08:45:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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More than a woman,
and angel is she.
Her eyes a constellation,
and in them I am lost.
Her hair as a river,
and sweetly it flows.
Her legs as a princess,
and her stroll a noble one.
Her neck it's length,
perfect in composure.
Her hands as a potter,
and my heart her clay.
Her kiss a soft delight,
the warmth only a goddess could bestow.
Her voice it's sweet sound,
could calm a thousand storm's.
More than a woman,
my angel she'll be.
Mark~
copyright (C) 2002
Copyright ©
romitalian
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2002-07-31 20:45:37]
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Re: Evolution
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 10:12:37 PM AEST
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Not sure why this is called "Evolution"... too early in the morning here to think... lol.. But it is a very beautiful write... well done!
Daniela |
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Re: Evolution
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:42:55 AM AEST
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| boo hoo dont get the brownie point but I think it is about a love for your woman and it is beautiful.......... but then the world is talked about here... the world is the woman right.... sandy |
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Re: Evolution
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:05:06 PM AEST
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well, either you could be talking bout your loved one.if its a personal writting...or about the birth of your daughter?!?!?!?!?!?
im out!!!i dunno!my brains starting to hurt!!!!!!! |
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