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Too blind to see

Contributed by tay2fye29 on Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 03:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tears on your face, and your face in your hands
Everyone is gone and you are alone once again
your actions have gotten you to this spot, and you dont know where to go
And when you try to think to think of happiness, It seems as if misery is all you know
No one around anymore to tell you that they care, they're gone and you're alone and its a little more than you can bare
All this hurt and lonesome has left you feeling sick and weak
Love and your family's love, right now is all that you seek.
you miss your spirit, soul, and heart, Because slowly but steadily you're falling apart
Looking for God, Calling for help,
all you wanted was for someone to know exactly how you felt
Praying for an answer to correct the horrible mistakes you've made
But i guess guilt and lonliness are some of the prices to be paid.
So many times you want to cry because you're feeling so alone
There are some days, most days, when you dread coming home
Some days you go out and look for love, but it seems it will never come
And it seems as if in the whole entire world, you are the only one.
All of these feelings you have are so difficult to describe
Staying or leaving, its so difficult to decide
you try to say something to anyone, just someone
But they never seem to know what mindstate its coming from.
They take it as surprise, a joke, as a laugh
you used to be whole, not just a third, or a half
Nobody understands you , so you begin to curse God's name
you were already so angry, and too blind to see that the answer you had been looking for had already came.
Now your life is upside down and it seems like theres nothing to live for
And just when you're about to take your own life, The answer to your prayers comes walking through your door.

Copyright © tay2fye29 ... [ 2009-08-08 15:24:43]
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Re: Too blind to see (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 04:23:08 PM AEST
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awesome writing and I luv the ending.
Good work.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

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