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Gone
Contributed by
ZukoFlame
on
Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 02:54:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Without a final kiss.
Without a last goodbye.
Without a reassuring hug,
To tell me not to cry.
Tears trickling down my cheeks,
Tell that this is not a dream.
For truly you have left,
And there’s nothing’s left, it seems.
Throughout my life I’ll mourn,
Through sleepless nights I’ll weep.
For living without you,
Robs my nights of sleep.
My eyelid never closes.
Tears of salt trail down my face.
By now they’ve left a track,
That my liquid sorrow’s traced.
I know I should move on,
But that can never be,
For how could I enjoy a life,
Void of you with me?
Copyright ©
ZukoFlame
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2009-08-08 14:54:24]
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Re: Gone
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by kye on
Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 03:24:35 PM AEST
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Wondrous! Well worth the read.
It was a truly unique poem that was composed in such a way that it was fluid in motion to read. Which I love!!
I felt it in the region of my heart and those are the best kind to read.
Well done. Well done.
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Re: Gone
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 08:56:47 PM AEST
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I love it. I usually find contest poems feel forced, due to the restrictions in place, but this flowed wonderfully and I loved the direction you took with your word allocations. This is actually really hard to do, and you did it really well.
Well done,
Phil xxx |
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