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Let the dark side see the light of day
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 10:24:45 AM in AEST
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As I've said we all have dark thoughts
Where our morals rot
People you should let the dark side see the light of day
Let us hear what your other half has to say
Interesting as it would be
Just for a glimpse to see
The other side of your thoughts
Where you let good will rot
Most choose the dark half to hide
Holding back remarks seen to be snide
Let us see your dark half
Let us have a taste of your wrath
Don't hold back anymore
Let the words pour
From your dark side of mind
That you all try so hard to hide
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
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2009-08-07 10:24:45]
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Re: Let the dark side see the light of day
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 02:41:31 PM AEST
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Is the dark side always the bad side ?
I wonder...........certainly provokes some thought.
Interesting stuff
Steve |
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Re: Let the dark side see the light of day
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 08:09:54 PM AEST
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Good work, my friend, I'll think about it. Who knows?
Any ways great writing as always.
Smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Let the dark side see the light of day
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by PreciousKitten on
Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 09:15:45 AM AEST
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| i have enjoyed reading this poem, i just feel and understand where u were going with this. i like this, so keep it up. |
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