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Transparent Reality
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 07:28:26 AM in AEST
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The reality of the world is paper-thin;
superficial smiles signify shallow intentions.
The depth of many human souls is measured by an obliging grin.
Nothing meaningful seems to keep humanity's attention.
I can see right through the translucent torsos tainted with toxic technology.
Cookie-cut conformity created by corrupted computers,
Humans living in a virtual reality to escape humanity,
time is running out for worn-down reality.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-08-07 07:28:26]
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Re: Transparent Reality
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by dirk-velvet on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 09:30:38 AM AEST
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It has already ... ... ... run out.
(negative ? ... your words hold true !)
more ... ... sad, than negative.)
( nice write ! ) |
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Re: Transparent Reality
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 02:27:41 PM AEST
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Despite technology being a big part of my world I can see where you are coming from and agree with that.
I think that for all its usefulness, we often use it for the wrong purpose, maybe that's the saddest part
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