|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
cold hearted
Contributed by
aidoman
on
Thursday, 6th August 2009 @ 11:22:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
She smiles when your sad, she crys whens your glad.
Her garden of hate is full of flowers.
Her heart rains pain, it comes in sprinkles then in showers.
Isn't it clear, she thrives of your hearts fear.
Like tears from the sun, her warmth brings pain along.
This end isn't now at all, I still have to wake,
I'll still remember the fall.
Her stone cold heart tore this mans whole world apart, her
eyes seems to glow in the dark, now i see she wasn't meant to be a woman,
but more likely a shark.
Absolute pain fills my eyes, like a drownin rain thats never seises to rise.
Once I woke cryin at nite, the tears tearing my skin,
it was a horrific site, though it was dreams she was still in.
I didnt want to end it this way,
I didnt know what else to say..
I left with hate in mind,
now nothing in my heart feels kind.
All i want is a brand new start,
all i need is a replacement heart.
Copyright ©
aidoman
... [
2009-08-06 23:22:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: cold hearted
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 6th August 2009 @ 11:58:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I see you're new hear. Please let me welcome you to our global family here at YPDC.
Great writing.
Hang tuff.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
|
|
Re: cold hearted
(User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 02:05:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It was nice. The reader gets the picture and that's really important.
Peace
Ammar |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
