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STAY
Contributed by
LadyRose
on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 12:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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there once was a girl she was locked in her own world
prisoned by hatred fear and regret
she lost her lover to a life sentence
He lied to her told her sweet tales
now she is devistated
she has to life with hiv aids
he was promiscious she wasnt aware
cause he promised to be faithful
he will always be there
now she has to live a life shortend
one day she had to see a doctor
cause she felt ill
doctor said congradulations
you are having a baby
she felt like a crippled blind man
and couldnt bare to see her child
live with this virus
she took a bunch of pills
swallowed it fast
this nightmare she didnt want to last
time past away slowly and after an eternity
she openend her eyes and felt dreamy
am I in heaven
the nurse said no your alive
she closed her eyes and said softly
I must be worth something if death doesnt even want me
though she knew she would die anyway
something inside of her begged her to stay
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LadyRose
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2009-08-05 12:07:32]
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Re: STAY
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 04:50:42 PM AEST
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Interesting write, in the style of a fairy tale yet a tale far from it !!
Loved the way you knitted this together
Steve |
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Re: STAY
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 04:04:38 PM AEST
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nice story with a sad beginning but a happy ending. take care
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