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three eighteen oh eight

Contributed by thesweetestsin65 on Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 11:19:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Today was the last day, we finally gave up…
Now I’m wondering if my heart will ever mend.
I regret letting you slip away.
I can’t believe this is the end.
We said we’d never let go and we would never fall…
But I guess we lasted long enough, we just fell apart through it all
We both said we would never love again,
But this is now, and that was then

But when you think about me I hope you can smile,
And when you think about us I hope you think about the good times.
Because all of that can’t be considered time wasted…
The love we shared wasn’t savored, it was just tasted.
We hurt each other over and over, now nothing can be said
You ***** me over and I just returned the favor
So I know before I say this it’s going to be too late…
Never forget three eighteen oh eight

“Forever and always” is what we always said
It’s what you promised me, it’s what you put in my head.
But you never followed through with that deadly lie,
You just ripped me apart thread by thread.
You never heard me when I was calling out to you,
You were never there to help me make it through.
I was blinded, wanting my baby back again…
But this is now, and that was then

But when you think about me I hope you can smile,
And when you think about us I hope you think about the good times.
Because all of that can’t be considered time wasted…
The love we shared wasn’t savored, it was just tasted.
We hurt each other over and over, now nothing can be said
You ***** me over and I just returned the favor
So I know before I say this it’s going to be too late…
Never forget three eighteen oh eight

Copyright Â© thesweetestsin65 ... [ 2009-08-04 23:19:07]
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Re: three eighteen oh eight (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 07:52:59 AM AEST
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Hi. You've got a really good flow going. It seems to me it could be lyrics. Keep up the good work. :) ell

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