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R.E.M.
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 11:03:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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lucidity sleeps in the curve of the neck & spine.
ripely waiting. . . tempered with pluck & string
the incus lure of otherworldly notes. . .
tinged with recognition.
a hint
zen melody that permeates
like swollen vapor, into the folds & layering
blotting
juxteposed
(to those of late-waking ideologies)
of supine consciousness.
ocarina charms. . . in vast star chambers
perplexity dreams, curled sumptuously. . . irrespective of revelations.
that Indian giver. . .
to draw back, delicately, the veil of any found
only but to return it upon dawns' blushing, opaque bride.
. . . I entreat ye, secrets, bursting
theihs receding. . .
harvesters' discarding moments of bewildered care
that fall
earth bound, epigenesis. . .
that in that death / cosmos, so untoward
reveals a tiny entity.
barren
urgency. . .
that sown arboreal something
(negated memory stubble, head nod)
roots ironically mocking with a reach
vexed / serpentine. . .
hope embedded, mercurial. . .
precocious seed. . . omega point
what braver moral, waxes. . . burns?
desert barren & (ever) shifting to sand tree
to bare-branched abyss
glacial to sky ocean
universal intricacy. . .
fond mote
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-08-04 23:03:24]
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Re: R.E.M.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 11:07:58 PM AEST
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| So, yeah, remember what I said about Shakespearean? That feel, that sound, that read. |
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Re: R.E.M.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 04:47:19 PM AEST
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I was entranced by the way you moulded so many powerful words together in such a clever way
Inspiring write
Steve |
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