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Blank Canvas
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 07:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Standing idly waiting for happy colors,
I exist in a limbo of lifeless gloom.
Ghostly white bleaches my soul's cover;
The bright white illuminate's the insanity of the room.
Colors have become extinct;
for me the canvas is lifeless and dead.
April 2009
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-08-04 19:29:37]
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Re: Blank Canvas
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 08:19:59 PM AEST
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good imagery xpressing ur emotions, i hope the 'canvas' now has a nice scenery painted on it...take care
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Re: Blank Canvas
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 08:24:20 PM AEST
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Sad but very good exspresion of your feelings,
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Blank Canvas
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 06:55:49 AM AEST
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Excellent metaphor. you've described this emotion
exceptionally. I especially loved the line,
"Colors have become extinct;"
Flawless!
~ Breezy
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Re: Blank Canvas
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 07:17:42 AM AEST
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Ghostly white bleaches my soul's cover
That line it too cool.
I like this poem. Short yet still conveys that feeling very well.
Take care,
Tim |
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