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Cold Steel
Contributed by
ryanadams
on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 04:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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love
happiness
Pain
Intimately embracing the fabrics of our lives
Gracefully created by the weaving of your lies
I had given you my world, everything but the skies
And still you birthed this knife that will cause my demise
This blade that was forged with the fires of self hate
Cooled with the waters of a love you say is fake
Engraved with the memories of times I can't recreate
And given its edge from my pleas, all of which you forsake
The steel flashes in your grip as up high circle buzzards
Your eyes gleam with darkness as you prepare your few words
The shock hits me first
I sink to the floor
Followed by the feeling of the cold metal in my heart
I feel a pain like never before
The handle protrudes from my chest
You proceed to the door
I was stabbed with the the simple phrase
"I don't love you anymore"
Copyright ©
ryanadams
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2009-08-04 16:36:56]
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Re: Cold Steel
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 06:23:21 PM AEST
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One can feel the piower of pain is this awesome write.
I can certainly relate to this master peice.
good work.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Cold Steel
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by Chamaron on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 02:13:59 PM AEST
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| Absolutely powerful and exquisitely eloquent. |
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