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My Wine
Contributed by
Mars
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Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 10:16:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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To whom it may concern,
Embodies, my love,
Like clothes...
Like shoes...
Like like and alike I am hungry.
But for none other and one other,
Let it and I be not,
That we both drink,
And drank,
And drunken...
Flow unwittingly glassed,
Separate, and free from our incantation
Both shallow and transparent.
I drink tonight,
To us,
To sweets,
To the blind eye,
That of night looks away
For fear of casting a shadow caught in the act.
To your number,
To the nightlife,
To a long life
Together.
But no, that's not it.
Too sweet,
Two tastes,
Two states...
Me?
You?
It'll be the same.
I think I'll have another.
Copyright ©
Mars
... [
2009-08-04 10:16:54]
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Re: My Wine
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by ming on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 10:56:04 AM AEST
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| Awesome! Awesome! Bravo... I wish it was mine. :) |
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Re: My Wine
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 02:27:54 PM AEST
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i can relate to this... drinking the burdens away...
wine tastes better than hard drinks/beer haha. anyway good job on this one
take care
-K.Z. |
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