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Eden and Sin

Contributed by sinned on Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 06:25:39 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

A woman and man entwined under a tree
Morning mist the only cover
Stirring under a nature cantaloupe
Man reaches his hand to a breast
Woman um's the pleasant touch
Stretching Her breast raise and heave
Stirs to mornings coming delight
Embracing to words
You are the most beautiful sight
Misty arousing passions allure
He mounts like an animal
The both have seen
Um's and ah's a child conceived
Snuggles and cuddles
Woman and man naked and pleased
Shame has no name
Natural together Adam and Eve

Rising to the greenery warm and plush
Animals come close to the touch
Water flows sparkling white
The sun rises
The waters a fire
Clear skies and waters blue hue
Naked unknowing in happiness
A world perfect our God is pleased
Man woman under angels but a degree
Flowers and blooms among the trees
Far as far as one can see
Man and woman fit right in
A world created without sin

A serpent slithers within a tree
Woman,woman come to me
Unfearing woman takes heed
Adam a step away
listens and agrees
Take this fruit upon this tree
Knowledge of everything you will know
God in heaven up above
Knows His power you will have
He told us do not eat
Because He fears you take His seat
Go ahead ; take a bite
Forever you know wrong from right
Adam the man says go ahead
Woman Eve says you first
Together they bite opposite sides
The serpent falls to the ground
Cursed forever world round

Thunder rises from on high
Animals growl scratch and flee
Insects fly bite and crawl
The world changes once for all
Lord, Lord, but Adam said
The woman made me Lord I swear
Guilt flamed across the earth
Knowledge of sin passed to kind
Flashes of lightning before unseen
Violent wind, hail and cold
Hand unhanded Eve and Adam flee
A leaf for shame and calling of name
Were naked we never knew
Through bramble and bushes thorns anew
Scratches, cuts and blood flowing
Knowledge of sin forever a curse
The promise of I will come again
Sin will have its worldly reign
Knowledge you have
The right and wrong
The serpent on belly craws along

Copyright © sinned ... [ 2009-08-04 06:25:39]
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Re: Eden and Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 10:26:14 AM AEST
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Very nice, in particular line two. Very descriptive =P.

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