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esoteric eyelash
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 09:58:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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breath without a voice
vibrations of soft request
wish. . . sans lonely star
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-08-03 21:58:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: esoteric eyelash
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 08:12:20 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful!! |
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Re: esoteric eyelash
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 11:00:48 PM AEST (User
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Exquisite! |
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Re: esoteric eyelash
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 06:52:03 AM AEST (User
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An interesting and lovely haiku, elle. It bursts with emotion.
There is a calming movement about it, but it also tears at the
heart in the most melancholy way. A sadness that almost seems ......
comforting.
Wonderful work.
~ Breezy
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