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Melancholy in Reverse
Contributed by
UrbanFlower
on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 07:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shake out my melancholy.
Leave me out to dry.
Utterly exposed,
Elementally profound.
There is nothing more you can drag from me,
The worst of me on show,
You’ll find no objection in my eyes,
I am here,
Take me to where the light shines.
Lay down beside me.
See right through me.
I am glass to your stone.
Believe that this is real,
Dare to live, for one night only.
Pretend the truth does not exist.
Each lie shakes a fragment of my soul.
No haze of doubt.
Nothing but translucent beauty in the night,
Our lives on show.
Just a kiss.
Five years in the making,
A second from ruin,
Place your hand in mine.
I’ll help you through the night.
Take away the beat,
I’ll cease to exist.
A figment of your imagination.
I was just your melancholy.
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UrbanFlower
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2009-08-03 19:49:59]
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Re: Melancholy in Reverse
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:02:23 PM AEST
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My heck, this went right through me.
Incredible verse here, one I think we relate to as well.
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Re: Melancholy in Reverse
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by elle on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:06:09 PM AEST
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| what a lovely spiraling of verse. cheers. elle |
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Re: Melancholy in Reverse
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 09:10:12 PM AEST
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Very creatively write. The flow is beautiful!
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Re: Melancholy in Reverse
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 03:19:52 AM AEST
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A cutting end! This write was intelligent and creative.
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