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miss understanding
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 07:43:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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my sequin had a hole in it
&
(I had only one)
though pearly white
iridescentish
sigh. . .
it would never float
or fly
this small intrusive
inconsistency
it is
such a small thing
but. . .
I am at a loss
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-08-03 19:43:08]
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Re: miss understanding
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:03:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful Elle, I love your style of writing so much.
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Michelle |
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Re: miss understanding
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:49:18 PM AEST
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Dear Miss Understanding,
The puzzled procured a mind
The mind procured a puzzle
Intertwined they mingled yet,
Things were left unsaid
They knew,
They watched,
They learned
Together they were lost
Found they were together
Souls became their one
Fascination replaced the loss
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Re: miss understanding
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by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:56:49 PM AEST
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| i like this poem. u have express urself very well in this. |
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Re: miss understanding
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 09:13:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. Your writing always takes me on a poetic journey and leaves me thinking deeply.
--Heidi |
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Re: miss understanding
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 06:34:21 AM AEST
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Abstract at its finest!
I love how this piece can be perceived in so many different ways...according to the individual that is *smiles*
A wonderfully thought provoking read
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