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Left Unfinished
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 06:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I'm on my third cup of coffee
and I haven't eaten much today
if there comes a time
when I can feel safe in my own skin
I'll crawl out of it
and fly away
I listen to your heart breaking
through the phone line
and I feel powerless to help
(It's not my own doing)
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-08-03 18:49:25]
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Re: Left Unfinished
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:10:24 PM AEST
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Oh I felt this, loved the write.
I also understand, the coffee, the not sleeping and the feeling of not being able to help. Sometimes we just cannot, ya know?
Hope it all works out, tomorrow is a new day!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Left Unfinished
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 03:30:24 AM AEST
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There were some excellent lines in this, Especially:
'if there comes a time
when I can feel safe in my own skin
I'll crawl out of it
and fly away'
Very good indeed.
-phil
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Re: Left Unfinished
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd September 2013 @ 11:59:59 PM AEST
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It can take a very long time to get to every good poem on this site and I'm glad I finally made it around to this one.
I really connected with that last stanza. I guess I've been there in a similar situation a time or three.
Thank you for an enjoyable read. |
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