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Love for a Patio.
Contributed by
Redsimmy
on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 05:36:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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to fall in love once
can break your heart
to fall in love twice
is not too smart
but if your two loves
were at the same time
why it seems as if
its almost a crime
and if your two loves
were to love each other
their faces
you would want to smother
and with their bodies
you will need to discard
a quick glance
to the back yard
you think to yourself
to the head a quick blow
for you have always needed
a new patio.
Copyright ©
Redsimmy
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2009-08-03 17:36:04]
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Re: Love for a Patio.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 05:41:19 PM AEST
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lol... that is funny. Good effort for a first poem. Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Love for a Patio.
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 05:53:34 PM AEST
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Very amusing. Nice piece
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Re: Love for a Patio.
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by Obscured_Existance on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 06:21:37 PM AEST
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Lol yeah that is funny welldone for the first time!:)
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Re: Love for a Patio.
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by CharminglyAwkward on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:16:59 PM AEST
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i didnt think it was funny at all,
it was beautiful and witty. good job! =) |
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Re: Love for a Patio.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 03:37:35 AM AEST
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Hilarious! That is the blackest of black comedy, and we all know that is the best comedy of all.
if no one loves you at all, can you bury yourself under the patio?
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