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no question no answer
Contributed by
apartment213
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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theres a road but ur never behind the wheel
a voice its not ur's but its behind ur eyes
oh no we're not, touchy subjects without off switches
only the best philosophy comes from test dummies
if we live then we live but sometimes we might think we die
sun gone down on us we fight we fight just not enough
son come down on us we fight we fight its never enough
when we rise im never enough im never enough im never the one never enough
theres a sky but we're never gonna hit the ground
theres an answer to a question we're never gonna ask
theres a god who never created life, bore a son who gave birth to tragedy
theres never enough food and that voice says okay
theres a reason we might a treason theres a mind in our time
im not the one
never enough
im not the one
never enough
im not the one
never enough
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Re: no question no answer
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by venkat on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 06:35:20 AM AEST
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| at that age means. a very good write. venkat |
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Re: no question no answer
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:50:11 PM AEST
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| wow, i really like this - i think it would make a great song. excellent rhythm and the content is pure philosophy, gives a sense of your thoughts at that time. great write, check out some of my stuff if you like, Kate x |
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Re: no question no answer
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by karoody on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:19:05 AM AEST
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I liked this. it's a different style for you. i like both. this one shows a lot of emotion and i svery thought provoking
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Re: no question no answer
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:08:20 PM AEST
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"only the best philosophy comes from test dummies
if we live then we live but sometimes we might think we die" Those 2 lines really grabbed me, i love how you write, i cant say it enough. Perfectly done. :O)
Lindsey
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