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Secret Love
Contributed by
Obscured_Existance
on
Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 07:44:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Secret Love..
Come my way
Show me your passion
While we both play..
No one must know that we are here..
The silence surrounds us
But our is breathing so loud and clear..
Our bodies intense with sexual lust
Let me take your hand in mine
And run your finger tips
Across my mouth so slowly
So softly over my lips
As I suck on them and moan
And tease you all I can
Our temperatures are rising
I then feel of your firm hand
As it grasps me by my hip
And pushes me closer to you
Oh god I feel in heaven
As I look at you
Darling can you feel
What you have done to me..?
Our pulses racing fast
Tell me can you see
Run your tongue down me
And taste my skin so soft
Not missing any part of me
Do with me what you please
I now can feel your soft wet tongue
On my inner thighs
Feeling so intoxicated
With this natural high
You move on further up
And taste me all you can
As you gently push my thighs apart
With your loving hands
My body then explodes
You know what you have done..
Can you feel how sweet I taste
While our bodies become one
I now straddle onto you
And my back begins to arch
I take you deep inside
Oh baby dont you stop
Lets just enjoy this ride..
The more intense it gets
The deeper I feel you go
You look at me with such desire
As we move with sexual flow
I know now that the time has come
When we are almost done
For we can not hold back nomore
As our souls become one..
Copyright ©
Obscured_Existance
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2009-08-02 19:44:11]
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Re: Secret Love
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by spud on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 01:10:37 AM AEST
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Well! You've done it again! Explicit, hot,
wild and wonderful! A trip to the moon!
A man my age has to watch his b.p.
Cold shower helps.
Keep the pen flowing.
Tommy
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Re: Secret Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 03:27:09 AM AEST
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Yippee! You posted it! It was sex (obviously), but it was tastefully done I thought. It wasn't a reluctant poem about sex, it was a poem that went for sex full on (in the lyrical sense) and brought it to life. This is, quite simply, how you write a poem about sex.
-phil |
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Re: Secret Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 03:00:40 PM AEST
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Wow, pretty much what they said. I love the way you take it to the limits with precision.
Tim |
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Re: Secret Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 02:23:47 PM AEST
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Clearly a warm summer evening is not the best time to read this.
Still, at least I will save on hot water as I think a cold shower might be more appropriate
Steve |
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