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Erase me
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Take me, shake me, break me until I can’t pretend I’m real
Kiss away my consciousness until I no longer feel
Use me
Mentally abuse me
Cut me open, burn me and never let me heal
Praise me, amaze me, raise my hopes and then throw them all away
Ruin me, drown me in my tears and freeze me in dismay
Steal me
Physically kill me
Tear me, only I deserve to feel this way
Bite me, fight me, rip up my self–respect and make me fall
Collect up my dreams and take them all
Hate me
Annihilate me
Obliterate my senses until I can’t even crawl
Erase me, phase me, beat me, never grant my wish
Shake my universe and steal my final kiss
Choke me
Mentally provoke me
Rub out my life until I no longer exist
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Re: Erase me
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:37:08 AM AEST
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Lucie simply amazing, beautiful all your poems speak to me. Keep on writing...
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: Erase me
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by karoody on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:51:44 AM AEST
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so sad, but well written. I enjoyed this a lot but hate seeing you sad...
kara |
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Re: Erase me
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by venkat on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 06:38:18 AM AEST
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| very emotional.. sad. venkat |
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Re: Erase me
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by yellow_sundragon on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:02:01 PM AEST
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This is so sad and so beautiful at the same time. Your words move me... I hope it gets better...
YS |
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Re: Erase me
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:12:01 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem .. the words you have used to express your anger and pain are brilliant. Five stars... Jan |
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Re: Erase me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:16:44 PM AEST
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A beautiful piece of writing, heart wrenching makes a person look inside of one self, to wonder if anyone is capable of the hurt you are talking about.
Bravo very well done. |
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Re: Erase me
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by Cici on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 02:14:44 PM AEST
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See i told you that you should put that poem on here, look how many comments you got! Everyone agrees with me this poem is ACE!
Claire |
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Re: Erase me
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by M on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 10:41:42 AM AEST
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| I love this poem Lu, it's amazing, especialy the last stanza, but the whole thing is amazing. |
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Re: Erase me
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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brillaintly written lucie, just amazing....i'm in awe
Lindsey |
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Re: Erase me
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 03:20:15 PM AEST
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why would anyone want to erase such a wonderful poet... this poem brings thoughts to mind... what am i doin in life... what if life ended so sunddenly what would happen... usin an "eraser" requires a lota thought
-Sid |
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Re: Erase me
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 11:30:21 AM AEST
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| wickedly powerful...strong, raw emotion. totally sums up how i feel today. excellent write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Erase me
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:25:17 PM AEST
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wow...i'm speachless....amazing write. simply amazing and beautiful and raw. nothing i say will do justice to how amazing this poem really is. thank you for writing this poem.
Love Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Erase me
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:28:25 PM AEST
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wow...i'm speachless....amazing write. simply amazing and beautiful and raw. nothing i say will do justice to how amazing this poem really is. thank you for writing this poem.
Love Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Erase me
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:02:05 AM AEST
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I'm sorry i haven't commented before, i was just unsure, you know?
anyway, a beautiful poem as always, but this is definitely one of my favourites.. I really do love it...
x_x_x |
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Re: Erase me
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by vincy on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 05:03:27 PM AEST
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Provocative to say the least.
I have posted 2poems Foreplay & Foulplay
some similarities? |
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Re: Erase me
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 05:05:04 PM AEST
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| well done for putting it on here it was definately worth it. a really really good poem, i wanna see lots more!! xxx |
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Re: Erase me
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by Merry on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:12:33 PM AEST
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great write - passionate angry - I can hear it loud and roaring then softly crying -
merry |
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