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Life inside of me
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 09:02:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Life inside of me
I carry it for nine months
my belly stretches as it grows.
I feel it moving inside of me,
a feeling only a woman knows.
All the minor ailments that comes with it
does not matter,
For within a few months I will be a mother....
Giving birth a terrifying act.
The thought gives me chills
cause with my efforts I have to push it into this world.
I feed and it feeds with me.
When I am emotional it can sense it
And the anticipation...
What will it look like?
It will be my baby,my child.
my offspring....
My son or daughter
I will be its mother.
Great responsibility
a bond for life,no matter how old we will be
I carried that life inside of me.
Copyright ©
LadyRose
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2009-08-02 09:02:33]
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Re: Life inside of me
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 11:30:37 AM AEST
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So true LadyRose...but some of us never know... and are left to wonder.
A lovely happy write..Congrats...
My next post is going to be the flip side of this....
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Re: Life inside of me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 03:37:05 PM AEST
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An excellent write. So human and genuine. I can see why Jenni liked it so much.
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Re: Life inside of me
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 05:38:23 PM AEST
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yes I agree, a lot of wonder within this verse, as Jenni said some of us do not know nor ever will. I am happy for you though! What a joy!
Nicely written verse sweety
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