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Corridors
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Saturday, 1st August 2009 @ 09:39:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We fell—
Our eyes closed to
Kisses
Memorizing the interior
Of quieted tongues
Our hands opened
And searched for
Deserted corridors
Buried in the valleys,
In the mountains and hills
Of our separating skin
We fell—
Our fingers burdened
Our mouths deceived
With words entangled in
Callous storm
Our dreams divided in
Wrath and spite
Alone in the corridors
Forgotten in the valleys,
Lost in the mountains and hills
The lily of the waters
Fade
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2009-08-01 21:39:45]
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Re: Corridors
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 06:07:31 AM AEST
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some great imagery in this, good work.
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Re: Corridors
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 08:48:31 AM AEST
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Some amazing images come to mind here, grrl.... good write..
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