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soft jade pillow
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 07:43:02 AM in AEST
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abstract
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withering words
struggling for air
while I suffocate
within
uneven spiral
snappable
fragile-edged
lace doily
paper cut
snowflake
outside of me
my words
are sharp
with ownership
language ballerina
spinning on
linguistic dime/time
empty words
sideways sentences
marking strength
linking relations
expressing
uncertainty
like being
quiet water
hear more
be more
am more.
Copyright ©
ming
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2009-07-31 07:43:02]
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Re: soft jade pillow
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 08:37:08 AM AEST
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Nicely written. I especially like the beginning. Elegant use of language.
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Re: soft jade pillow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 04:37:59 PM AEST
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Nicely done. For some reason 'quiet water' particularly stuck out for me.
-phil
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