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We died with every promise you made
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 07:15:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We died.....
We died with every promise you made.
You ripped my heart out of my chest....
Sternum crushed...
I am bleeding internally,
pale and dry constantly.
Words you said still run through my mind.
I remember the night you cried.
Why?
It was all a lie......
We died with every promise you made.
To love again,
I am so afraid.
You cut my spirit with a blunt knife.
Small pieces....
You disposed of me like feaces.
We died with every promise you made.
But I live,
terrified.....
A fragile heart.
Bruised and scar'd
Never the less I still breath easy
You cant take my soul away from me.
Copyright ©
LadyRose
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2009-07-31 07:15:36]
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Re: We died with every promise you made
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 12:39:45 PM AEST
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This is sad, yet, I like the way it expresses standing strong in the last two lines. I also like the descriptive imagery. Very emotional.
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Re: We died with every promise you made
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 04:40:54 PM AEST
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Incredibly powerful words. A cut above the usual 'frustration with love' stuff.
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