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Asunder
Contributed by
moxie
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Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 07:58:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Asunder
Edward Iacona
As I walk the dog each night, I stare into the sky.
The stars alone bear mute witness to my daily weary sigh
I still ask the heavens of what went wrong to love that went awry.
And I think of the things we could have done but she would not even try.
Writing rhymes about our problems is a great temptation.
No matter our marital pitfalls there were vows of dedication.
Heartbreak and richer lawyers are the only education
True soul mates who have broken bonds are a sad aberration.
Love and trust can be repaired, make it your marriage vocation.
Marriage and family live in love and should not seek cessation.
So, these words from I who may face life in relative isolation
'Never make a permanent fix to a temporary situation.'
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moxie
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2009-07-30 19:58:33]
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Re: Asunder
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 08:31:58 PM AEST
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I hope you get an answer to what went wrong. I also hope happiness can one day enter your life again. I am going through some tough times in my marriage but will never give up because we each promised to love. Very well-written.
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Re: Asunder
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 1st August 2009 @ 01:41:41 PM AEST
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very helpful words of wisdom
and xperience. like the last line esp.,
nicely written, hope all goes well in ur relationship.
take care
-K.Z. |
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