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The beauty of you
Contributed by
bubkin
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Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 05:32:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our love was like a thunderstorm
that chased through the midnight sky
Past clouds of hurt and crackles of pain
to find the beauty of stars in your eyes
Through the pain of love and tangle of lies
finally the hurt of relationships pass
We found that ours was a love that could never die
our hearts combined were made to last
I gave up everythin just to be in your arms
and you are forever in my heart
I can always find you in my head and dreams
even when we find we are apart
Those three words that seem whipered so much
always seem real when they come from you
For I can see deep in your soul and into your heart
the sweetest sound from you lips is so true
You will forever glow with everlasting beauty
for your heart is on show for me
And the truth in your eyes and love in your heart
is something I will always see
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bubkin
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2009-07-30 17:32:26]
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Re: The beauty of you
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by Obscured_Existance on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 05:42:07 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! Need i say more? :) |
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Re: The beauty of you
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 05:54:34 PM AEST
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Beautiful declaration of love... Well done
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Re: The beauty of you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 12:46:41 PM AEST
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Yes, this is undoubtedly your best. This poem says so much about you and is like your soul laid out in 5 stanzas for all to see. Like you, it is deep, honest and affectionate. There are just so many highlights:
'Past clouds of hurt and crackles of pain
to find the beauty of stars in your eyes'
'We found that ours was a love that could never die
our hearts combined were made to last'
'I gave up everythin just to be in your arms
and you are forever in my heart '
'For I can see deep in your soul and into your heart
the sweetest sound from you lips is so true'
and the final stanza is amazing.
I like the emphasis on truth and the soul, rather than on external appearance. This is as close to my definition of love as any poem is ever going to get.
Beautiful!
-Phil xx
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