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Who
Contributed by
Obscured_Existance
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Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 04:19:23 PM in AEST
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Who is he that makes my heart race?
His smile he gives with beauty and grace,
A man ive known for many years..
A man for whom I wished could dry my tears..
Who is he that I know I cant keep..
Just admire and dream of as I sleep,
To hold him I can only dream
A dream it will remain as it seems
Who is he that brightens my day
Even though so far its just distance they say
Just thinking about him makes my heart skip a beat
The thought of his kisses so soft and so sweet
Who is he whom I crave to touch
Wanting to feel his protection so much
I yearn for his love so sacred and pure
I know if I had him id not wish for more..
Who is this man forbidden to me
Only we both know and only we both see
Something so pure yet unreachable to us
Full of laughter, happiness, sadness and lust
For now I must wait just incase he'll be mine
A wait I can do regardless of time
Till then I hold on to the hope that oneday,
His love I will share and he'll feel the same way..
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Re: Who
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 04:28:21 PM AEST
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Isn't this the truth!!!
Interesting write.... Keep smiling and hoping..
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Re: Who
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 04:30:30 PM AEST
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Love can be a strange thing sometimes.
We find it in places that it cannot exist, yet somehow it does.
Welcome to YPDC
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Re: Who
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by Lizz on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 04:59:24 PM AEST
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i can relate to this poem. i like the way you wrote this poem. you have a way with words.
=D
~Lizz |
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Re: Who
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 09:26:38 PM AEST
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Ah, yes, love seems to happen regardless of anything else. Funny how that happens. This is nice and sweetly written. Hope that all works out.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Who
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by razorbladekisses on
Friday, 31st July 2009 @ 12:34:51 AM AEST
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Oh my. I know this feeling so well. To love someone who is far away and not being able to see them, touch them, .. etc.
Fantastic write.
-RBKisses. |
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