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My Heart..
Contributed by
Obscured_Existance
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Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 04:15:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Please take my heart..
For I have no use for it no more..
Damaged and broken
With so many flaws..
Please take my heart..
Take it far from me..
Bleeding and and dying
Can you not see?
Please take my heart...
Ripped from my chest
Tired and worn out
Not working its best..
Please take my heart..
And leave me my soul..
No more hurt will I feel..
Of this I've been told..
Please take my heart
Wanting to be set free..
Lifeless and empty
I now live in peace...
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2009-07-30 16:15:11]
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Re: My Heart..
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 04:33:18 PM AEST
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Sometimes we feel that emotions are a burden that shackle us, yet without them we are nothing.
They are what shapes us and make us the people we are............and give us poetic fuel !!
Never lose that heart !!
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Re: My Heart..
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 08:47:04 PM AEST
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Very well-written. I loved the flow and the deep emotion.
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