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Missing You
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 11:23:52 AM in AEST
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Missing You
While you were away, my thoughts were focused on you
About when we come together and what we might do
I had thoughts of running my fingers through your soft flowing hair
While into the deep pool of your captivating eyes I would stare
Then I would gently kiss your bright red lips
It seems like forever that I have dreamed about this
Holding your body close to mine
I feel your temperature begin to climb
Our kisses ignite the passion we have kept inside
There is no possible way this desire to further hide
To keep our balance you back against the wall
While faster into the tornado of lust we fall
In what seems like a few minutes we are fixing our attire
While smiling and enjoying the results of our desire
Your face shows your excitement like a magnificent blooming flower
When we realize we have been together for well over an hour
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Hurry dear and return home to me
This is the place that you need to be
When you are away my thoughts run wild and deep
In my heart your love I will always keep
Deadwriter
07/30/2009
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Re: Missing You
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 11:47:55 AM AEST
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Was it an hour??? Wow..time sure does fly when you're having fun... :>)
Lovely write, my friend...
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Jenni |
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Re: Missing You
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 11:56:25 AM AEST
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Woooooo this is beautiful, romantic and sensual. You always write so well.
Beautiful!
I am off to find the fan tee hee
Have a great day my friend
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Missing You
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 30th July 2009 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. Quite and romantic and passionate piece. You capture how this act of passion can stop time. Beautiful poetic expression of lust. I always enjoy your writing.
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