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A desolate September
Contributed by
ktbugg
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Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She said she didn’t love him
On the fourth day of July
But by the twelfth of August
She wished she hadn’t said goodbye
On a rainy day in September
She laid lonely upon her empty bed
Decided she would send him a card
And inside a heart it read:
“I don’t mean to be contradicting
but your eyes used to be addicting
and I was wrong in predicting
that our love would be restricting
I never meant to be so untrue
when I told you we were through
at the time I spoke a lie or two
because now all I really want is you”
On a stormy September morning
She received a note in reply
And in hoping he would feel similar
She read the words with a sigh
“I used to be in love with you
as you turned my eyes from green to blue
but you told me lies as they were true
and now, I’m sorry, I’ve found someone new”
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ktbugg
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2003-03-29 20:25:00]
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Re: A desolate September
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 10:26:19 PM AEST
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| Oh how devastating for her .. this is a lovely poem and I think it would make a nice song. |
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Re: A desolate September
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 10:46:11 PM AEST
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I agree it's very good but sad. It made me wonna cry and it takes something to make me cry. Very well written to touch hearts.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
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Re: A desolate September
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 11:09:48 PM AEST
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another great poem wow very touching and heart breaking. I dont know what else to say besides that.
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