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Midnight Umbrella - Lina
Contributed by
poluxthefifth
on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 07:25:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her whisper was the sun birth;
no one else could find my broken arrows
Here´s the deal: You fly and I watch your shadow;
You watch me sleep and I make you dream.
Narrow is the road, narrow.
Her whisper was a new world;
She put the stars above my insomnia,
Here´s the dream: I kiss your soul every single night;
you own my lips, everything you own.
I fight despair, everything I fight.
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poluxthefifth
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2009-07-28 19:25:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Lina
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 06:45:56 AM AEST (User
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Holy heck!! What an OPENING!!!
From there on, it doesn't matter what you write. You command your reader
with that first line. But oh, how amazingly breathtaking the rest of this
piece is. You have an unmitigated and innocent way with words, that gently
stirs the heart into a rapture of unlimited beauty.
Outstanding, poet! BRAVO!!
~ Breezy
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